"Do you want to say thank you?" he asks, brushing her dark curls back from her forehead. "Do you want me to take a picture so that you can see what you look like this? It's beautiful."
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"Do you want to say thank you?" he asks, brushing her dark curls back from her forehead. "Do you want me to take a picture so that you can see what you look like this? It's beautiful."